PAIJ Lost pages page one

So remember way back in February when I started a spin off comic for Pocky but only got to page 15? [link] It wasn't that I didn't finish drawing out the series. In fact I still have my original sketched out versions of the last few pages. They were just bad....I mean they were so rushed I didn't get any of my points across like I did here so rather then just edit them the way I had when I started this spin off, I decided to go back to my normal rout, Draw it in pen, color it with pencil, add the text with photoshop. This is a lot easier than what I was doing at first. So this is page 16 of Pocky's Adventures in Japan. I call them the lost pages because I really didn't have any idea where the pages were until about two weeks ago where I found the sketch pad I started them in. This ones better trust me.

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Cover: [link]

I also may re-do this page to include all of the characters including the bad guys and one character that hasn't shown up yet [link] or just do better character sheets.