What one little slip can do

New year new ID I ummm kinda traced the basics from this [link] I'm not gonna lie I traced it and added my own touches. This was just at first a practice for shading and other things in photoshop but I like how it came out so it's gonna be my new id. The title goes with the song I was hearing to at the time of drawing One Little Slip by Bear Naked Lady's [link] can you see the halo? I had a lot of trouble with that it never seemed to come out okay. . . again that goes on the whole inside joke between me and me her and are working on a comic Phillip still has to draw it but hey that's okay I think this turned out okay please give tips but don't be mean ^^